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The Bad Touch Trio x Reader {Lime}

"Damn it, Antonio!" You yelled as the hot water spilled on your shirt. You were cooking with Spain, and he tripped and got hot water all over you. "Oww!!!!" You yelped as it soaked through your t-shirt, burning you a little. You pulled the shirt away from your body, and started to run to your room so you could change. On your way, you ran into Prussia, which made the hot shirt touch your skin again. "Agh!" You spat. "Damn it, Gilbert, watch where you're going!!"

"Kesesese!" He laughed. "What happened to you?!" He smirked until he looked down at you, and he noticed he could see right through your wet white t-shirt. "Uhhh....boobies..." He stared at your chest, hypnotized. You pushed him aside, your cheeks turning a shade pinker. "Shut up, pervert!" You muttered, stomping to your room.

Prussia was always like that. Whenever you moved in with Gilbert, Antonio, and Francis three months ago, you wore a tight fitting t-shirt and shorts, and Gilbert just stood there, staring at you. Antonio did the same. You knew they had some sort of interest in you, but you were sure it was just because you had a heartbeat and tits.

Lately, you had been wearing sweatpants and baggy T-shirts to keep the three men from staring at you, but now all of your oversized shirts were in the dirty clothes, and all you had clean was a tight black tank top. Gilbert was gonna love this...

"_____?" You heard a light knock on your bedroom door. You threw your new, dry shirt on and ran to open it. It was Francis. He was holding a towel and had a worried look on his face. "Oh, you already dried off? I was worried about you when I heard your screams. Antonio told me what happened. Are you alright, mon cherie?" He blushed lightly, then smiled. "You look wonderful."

You smiled back."I'm fine, Francis, and thank you." Francis was one of your best friends, and you liked having that one person in your life that cared about your well being. But, there was one thing that bothered you. France was always making sexual advances to everyone, man or woman, but he never flirted with you. Sometimes he would compliment you, but it was always just an act of kindness. It bugged you because you had a slight crush on the frenchman.

"Shall we go to the living room? We could watch television if you wish, mon cherie." He smiled and began to walk down the hall that your room was at the end of. You passed Antonio's room, then Francis's room, and finally Gilbert's. You could hear he heavy metal music blaring behind the wooden door with the words "I'm awesome" carved into it. The music sounded nice, but Prussia's obnoxious singing didn't sound so good. Even so, hearing his voice made your heart skip. You had a crush on the German demon douche too.

Before you made it to the living room, Antonio stopped you and got on his knees, begging for forgiveness. "Oh, ____, Lo siento!!!! Por favor, perdoname!" He yelled, tears forming in the corners of his emerald eyes. "A little of the water slipped and I-" He caught sight of you smiling happily.

"No worries, amigo. All is forgiven." You grinned and walked to the living room to watch TV with Francis. Antonio bowed to you, happy to be forgiven. "Gracias!" As you walked away, your cheeks turned a shade pinker. Yes, you had a crush on the entire Bad Touch Trio.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~MAJESTIC AS FUCK TIME SKIP~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

You were combing your hair, getting ready for bed in your fresh clean green T-shirt and Black basketball shorts. You were comfy and happy to finally be going to bed. You turned off your light and crawled into your bed. As you were dozing off to sleep, someone pounced onto you, pinning you down by sitting on your waist. Then, you felt two sets of hands holding your arms down.

After the shock set in, you started to scream, but your mouth was covered by a hand. Then, you heard the laughter in the darkness. "Kesesese~!" Gilbert?! What the hell was Gilbert doing on top of you in the middle of the night?! But, that meant that Antonio and Francis were holding you down. Oh sweet jesus it was a dream and a nightmare at the same time!!

As you struggled to get free of the Trio's grip, one of them flicked the light on. Then, you got a good look at Gilbert. From his angle, he was even hotter than before. The way he looked at you made your heart flutter. He was looking at you like he wanted you. He leaned over, where there was only an inch or two between your lips. "Are you afraid of my awesome 5 meters?" He laughed, and the smirk didn't leave his face for a second.

You looked at your other captors. They both had the same expression as Gilbert. The look of "I am going to wreck that" plastered on Antonio's face, and the "I will make love to you until you cant walk." look from Francis. You looked back to the albino one, and gritted your teeth. "P-please don't hurt me...." You stammered, tears filling your eyes. You were terrified.

Gilbert's expression changed completely, as did the others' you assumed. He got off of you and signaled for the others to let you go. You sat up, tears streaming down your face. Silently, Gilbert grabbed you and held you close to his chest, trying to comfort you. "Vy could I vant to hurt someone this close to me, Liebe?"  He whispered in your ear, you could feel his breath on your neck.

You looked up at him, and he wiped your tears from your face, then pressed his lips against yours. As the kissing became more passionate, he licked your bottom lip, begging for entry, which you granted. His tongue danced with yours, and his hands went straight for your chest. You slapped them away without breaking the kiss. He instead placed them on your arms, holding you still.

"Hey, Gil, don't wear her out. We want a shot at her too~ Oh honhonhon~" Francis chuckled.

"Exactly, Amigo. I want a piece too." Antonio added, his voice sounded aroused from watching Gilbert attack your face.

Gilbert finally pulled away, and a thin line of saliva ran from your tongue to his. He kissed you one last time on the forehead, and Francis crawled onto your bed from where he was previously at; crouching on the floor.

For a moment, he just stroked your hair, gazing into your (e/c) orbs lovingly. "____, you don't know how long I've wanted to do this." He said, and before you could respond, his tongue was in your mouth. He tasted like wine, and his lips were intoxicating. You fell limp in his arms and you felt your arms turn to jelly. As his tongue explored your wet caverns, you opened your eyes only to see his half-lidded, admiring you as he kissed you.

After he pulled away, You felt hands on your shoulders, pulling you away from Francis. For a moment, you didn't want to leave his arms, but you knew you wanted Antonio too. Antonio didn't go for your mouth, though. No, he wanted your neck. He kissed it gently as first, then sucked lightly.

As Antonio was enjoying you, you looked back and Francis and Gilbert. France had Gilbert pinned to your bed, and had his tongue down his throat. Gilbert was letting out small groans everytime Francis pulled away, so Francis went right back to work, exploring the albino's mouth.

Antonio was moving upward now, kissing your jawbone and chin. Finally, he kissed you passionately on the mouth, but didn't try to make his tongue dance the salsa with yours.

You were tired now, about to fall asleep, and the three men laid you into your bed. Gilbert lay on top of you, resting his head on your breasts, the things that hypnotized him into coming up with this whole plan with the other two in the first place. "Ich liebe...." He yawned before finishing his sentence. "Ich liebe dich."

Francis, held your hand and kissed your cheek, then laid his head down on the pillow next to you, whispering "Je t'aime." into your ear.

Antonio took your other hand, and curled up next to you as well. "Te quiero, mi bella flor." He mumbled sleepily.

You closed your eyes and fell asleep, tangled in the bodies of the three men who loved you the most.
It is 5:53 in the morning, so I apologize if this sucks.


France, Spain, and Prussia belong to that one dude

You belong to these little fuckers right here: :iconyayfranceplz::iconyayspainplz::iconyayprussiaplz:

God damn, I'm tired..... (Proof Im tired? I added a little FrancexPrussia action in there. I didn't even know that couple existed.)

Anyway, this was a request from :iconcanadianlover247:
Now, what would Canadia say if he knew you wanted this, hmmm?
:iconemocanadaplz: He wouldn't say anything, he'd just feel real bad. (but we wouldnt notice because hes canada and no one notices canada but you cuz you want the canadianD)

Poo on you, Skylar. Poo on you. :iconyaycanadaplz:

The picture was off of a random hetalia yaoi tumblr. Sorry, I have no clue who it belongs to, but it doesnt belong to me.

~Also, I'm not sure why, but I keep imagining spain trying to fuck the reader with a churro.~

I also keep wanting to call him Antonio Banderas. Oh cheese.

I really should go to sleep....Goodni-:iconsnoreplz:

Reading over this, I'm really wondering what the FUCK I was thinking writing this.
"his voice sounded aroused from watching Gilbert attack your face."
"Attacking your face."
"Finally, he kissed you passionately on the mouth, but didn't try to make his tongue dance the salsa with yours."
"try to make his tongue dance the salsa with yours"

I really do need sleep.
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MajoSushi Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2015  Hobbyist
Cute? This is so damn adorable!
Hetalia-nerd-11 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
"Majestic as fuck time skip"
it was majestic as fuckI'm Spiderman!!! -Jacksepticeye (Request) THE KING OF FNAF FOREVER!!!-Markiplier free2use 

canada be like - Markiplier Shaking Icon Markiplier Shaking Icon
LILYPAD1000 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2015
Your description was literally the best description I e ever read XD it was almost, ALMOST better then the story XD really awesome story btw!!!! The was so much I loved about it :D
Paninipanda Featured By Owner Edited Aug 29, 2015  Student
I'm crying because I'll never have a relationship as good as thisNOOOO sobbing - crying 
SoulAnimeLover Featured By Owner May 16, 2015
" I added a little FrancexPrussia action in there. I didn't even know that couple existed."
well if it didn't exist before it does now.
:fangirl:  :nosebleed: Rainbow Emote Rave nose bleed Llama Emoji-16 (Nose Bleed) [V1] Excited Blush Neko Emoji-16 (Blush) [V1] AKCat-blush (Acchi kocchi) 
You are awesome.
i can't decide if this story is more awesome than ze awesome Prussia.

Hetalia Prussia (Laugh) Prussia (Evil Sneaky Plan) [V5] Prussia (Evil Sneaky Plan) [V5] Prussia (Evil Sneaky Plan) [V5] Prussia (Evil Sneaky Plan) [V5] Prussia (Evil Sneaky Plan) [V5] Prussia (Money Talk) [V1] 
thanks for a great story.
iloveleviackerman200 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
loveanime202 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2015
wen i read "attacking your face" my first though was face battle round one idk why XD 
kittygirl303 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2015
I' Tired and it's only 10:24
TechnolgicCheeto Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Antonio mi amigo! Woah! Demasiado lejos! xD Bruh
unicornsand Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2014
i will never get over the 5 meters
MyDepictionOfFiction Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I am owned by so many sexy men!
AuroraMagi Featured By Owner Edited Nov 27, 2014
awesome job! *fangirling* :3 :3 :3
:iconyayspainplz: :iconyayprussiaplz: :iconyayfranceplz:
Onceuponamyself Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
FUCK YOU Antonio lemme enjoy the yaoi next to me.*takes out electric potato and makes pictures and video's like their aint no damn tomorrow.*
Melody-lyric Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
YAY!! I'm not alone. I would record it and sell it to fangirls.
MyDepictionOfFiction Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
We are the Hungary but Not Actually Hungary Trio. I think...
Melody-lyric Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
MyDepictionOfFiction Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Melody-lyric Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Iluvsebasmichaelis Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014  Student Writer
I'mg France is getting done Prussia *noesbleed* noes bleed nose bleed 
CalypsoAeaea Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014
Thank you. just ........... thank you...............
ramdonm Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is my favorite BTT reader insert for 2 reasons:

1. It was fabulous as shit
2. It has the best goddamn description I have ever read in my entire life

Thank you, human. Thank you so fucking much. XD
RaveoliKarkat Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
MiyokaChan Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014  Student Artist
I fucking love you. This is so awesome

*muffled fangirls*
elephantgirl202 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014
when I read: ~MAJESTIC AS FUCK TIME SKIP~ I was thinking of Skydoesminecraft and budder!
MiyokaChan Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014  Student Artist
You have a Sollux profile picture thing
elephantgirl202 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014
MiyokaChan Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014  Student Artist
You'reYou're my friend now
elephantgirl202 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014
XxDaveStriderGirlxX Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014
elephantgirl202 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2014
midnalovver Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Fucking majestic indeed...2, no scratch that, 3 thumbs up!
NirvanaRivera Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This time skip is flip the table worthey!
CrimsonShea Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Best part about this: the timeskip xD
JustTheBestAround Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Hobbyist
I must agree
MyDepictionOfFiction Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
As do I. 
CrimsonShea Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
DetectiveDucktape Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Yes, that time skip was Majestic As Fuck V_V
queenoftheseas Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2013
What is the difference of lime and lemon
xXgabitheangelXx Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Actually Lime is just the foreplay without the real sex and lemon is...well the rest.
pacificislandlove23 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013  Student Writer
I think Lime is just like a Lemon...without the sex Llama Emoji-23 (Shyness) [V1] 
Akimoto-Michiyo Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013
omg love it

:iconhurrplz: dat yaoi
MadnessKishinAsura Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013   General Artist
Does anyone else find it hilarious anytime someone says "Holy sweet Jesus" ? No? Okay, it's just me and my weird friend then. 
RyuuAkujii Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2013
Dat timeskip was magestic as fk xD
Desichapa545 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013
Prussia why you know last longer XDDD
nemo--kitten Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013   General Artist
woah! that time skip WAS majestic as fuck
Keira-Giordano Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Damn hot guys...making me fall in love with them all over again in the middle of the night XDDD
Pink1398 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013
Will you be making a sequel?
KodanHajime Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
s-so,I'm copyright,bad touch trio?!
NearDeath13 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
NO!I belong to ONLY SPAIN!!!El es mi amor! :iconyayspainplz:
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